2017年高考英语作文技巧点拨：词汇的变化运用

语言表达中需要增加一些“亮点”。语言生动、流畅是近年书面表达题评分标准中提出的新要求，语言幼稚、生硬的作文得分一般不会超过及格分。基础稍好的同学应该尽量变化语言的表达方式，尝试使用较为高级的语言，同时注意突出段落中心，用好过渡性语句，使短文流动自然。如将“认为”写成hold the view that…，以及用Yet every coin has two sides.来表示不同观点之间的过渡都可被看着是短文中的亮点。

（一）、使用高级词汇,增加文章的亮点

1.合理使用动词, 使之符合不同的语言风格

试比较:　Ladies and gentlemen,

 Welcome to our school! Now I’d like to introduce our school to you.

Ladies and gentlemen,

 Welcome to our school! Now I’d like to tell you something about our school.

２．合理使用动词使表达更生动

试比较：At the foot of the mountain, there was a small river.

At the foot of the mountain, there flowed a small river.

3.变换动词使表达更地道

试比较： My parents and I are very pleased to invite you to stay at our home.

  　　　 My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.

４．合理使用动词能增强表达的逻辑性

试比较　

We may be one family and live under the same roof, but we don’t get much time to talk together.

We may be one family and live under the same roof, but we don’t seem to get much time to talk together.

5.巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

I used to like reading and writing poems at middle school.

I used to take delight in reading and writing poems at middle school.

6.使用助动词增强文章的感染色彩

I went there but I didn’t see you.

I did go there but I didn’t see you.

再如：1）. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.

Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.

2）We all think he is a great man.

We all think highly of him .

3）Suddenly I thought out a good idea.

A good idea occurred to me. （A good idea suddenly struck me）.

4）The students there needn’t pay for their books.

Books are free for the students there.

5）.As a result the plan was a failure.

The plan turned out to be a failure.

6）When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.

At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.

7）She went to Austria in order to study music.

She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.

8）When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.

The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.

9）In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.

Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.

10）You can find my house easily.

You’ll have no trouble finding my house.

（二）适当使用替代词，同位语，介词短语，形容词短语，非谓语动词等，使语言更精练．

试比较

1).So the missing money still must be in the other jacket, the jacket that you were wearing yesterday.

So the missing money still must be in the other jacket,the one that you were wearing yesterday.（０４年北京高考）

2).Do you think you’d like it? If you don’t like it, I can try and find another place for you.

Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you.  (2003NMET)

3).I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, which has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.

  I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.  (2003NMET)

4). We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening and watch TV, play games, and meet people.

   We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening , watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.

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